Soles of feet, now
fumbling feelings;
each blade of grass,
each worm cast caul --
even the grey, grass mantled rocks
warming their backs in the sun,
an emotional chiaroscuro.
Inside, a manatee does somersaults
and all reality is changed.
I am accepted.
I am accepted.
I have accepted,
I am a vessel for creation,
I am a vessel for creation,
and am tethered once more;
the transposed umbilicus,
completing the circle.
the transposed umbilicus,
completing the circle.
©Copyright rest with Niall O Connor
Illustration © Elida Maiques
http://elidamaiques.blogspot.com/

his is a really wonderful poem, but I would say that it needs a new title. For such great language as you've used in the rest of the piece to simply be titled "Pregnant" just seems like a bit of a waste. I wouldn't read a poem just based on that title (To be honest I hadn't looked at the subreddit before clicking so I had no idea what I was looking at). My_muddy_eyes
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Jesus but I love this Niall.
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