The garden zone - friendly, forest zone - cool.
Night fell too soon, when the steeply sloped rain forest,
and the servant hills, slipped underneath us, in the dark.
I fought my way upwards, headlamp illuminating nothing
but poring dirt; all around me, the sounds of leopards,snakes
and — geography confused, in this primordial forest,
where life springs from decay.
We camped, and stripped to nakedness,
trying to rebuild our shattered spirits with fresh clothes
and tea. Sleep came uninvited like a burglar,
silently stealing half finished cups from suddenly
limp arms.
Next morning, saw the departure
of those who could take no more
of those who could take no more
of this risk route; trip turned task.
Each day, life thinning out, nothing to be shared,
but pollo, pollo, slowly, slowly,
and then we left the earth.
There could now be no rescue,
even helicopters need air to breathe.
There could now be no rescue,
even helicopters need air to breathe.
On we climbed, and lungs heaved normally,
but tired muscles never received relief,
and no sound, other than those you made,
to keep an empty skull company.
We were now beyond the zone of life.
Beneath us, the jets, like pond skaters,
criss-crossing the expanse that was Africa,
and the curve of the world lay below and beyond.
On the last night, we tricked the mountain;
using its frozen steps to climb, when she slept.
By the time the sun had risen, we had reached her top,
standing ragged for our moments glory,
each a god among men, albeit with feet of clay.
Descent was by the coca cola route,
and with each thousand metres we fell,
fresh tears came,
as emotion, and life, and oxygen returned.
as emotion, and life, and oxygen returned.
I looked back
calling out your name
so you might save me
calling out your name
so you might save me
but even my footprints
were already erased.
©Copyright Niall OConnor
Images borrowed from Web


That was amazing. You took me there without having to drag my old, worn-out body with me. Thanks! liza_mae
ReplyDelete. . . a bit more effort than Lughnaquilla so!
ReplyDeletePaul Martin
Great writing
ReplyDeleteI went every step of the way. Loved it. Wonderful way with words. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteNuala Aine Lyons
Brilliant
ReplyDeletereally like this one....
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