Tuesday, November 8, 2011

Lost





Borrowed from http://www.layoutsparks.com/1/104603/lost-in-thoughts-dark-31000.html
The night is dark — full moon smothered
heaps of winter blanket cloud.
When I awake, I do not know, 
if the world has faded, or is it just,
I cannot see?
From the safety of my bed,
I step off into the dark,
in a room well memorised, one step, two.
Then reaching out, grasping air,
drowning. Where is the door?
Hands threshing, mind confused,
I am lost in this room, of walls and limits;
panic in a box prison, mis-made by me;
the only key, locked inside.
When the door is opened,
from outside,
the wall I searched, stares blankly white,
and the black is hidden,
returned to night.
Lost by nialloconnor
©Copyright Niall OConnor

2 comments:

  1. Powerful and resonating. Provoked visceral memories. Nightmarish moment suspended in appealing dreamlike images and language.

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  2. Aye tis the Winter of our Discontent or is it? Nice write!

    Siddartha Beth Pierce

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