Shocked awake
by the clarity of my vision
I struggle
to keep the walls
I have built
stone by heartfelt stone
crumbling
before the crush of
Presence
suspense of half-wake world
holds my mother’s young face,
separated from a wedding photograph
by intent and desire
hair frozen in the only perm
that lasted longer than a week
- she joked
then embrace of memory
outs a lurking tear,
and cold clay recaps.
©Copyright Niall OConnor 2013
I love this poem Niall - Beautiful imagery in these words, 'stone by heartfelt stone' and the scalding 'outs' is pitch perfect 'embrace of memory
ReplyDeleteouts a lurking tear,' Thanks for posting.
Excellent reminds me of your work Donall Dempsey ...
ReplyDeleteVery beautiful poem Niall O Connor!!
ReplyDeleteI love this, Niall. Made me go watch my boys sleeping.
ReplyDeleteWow, speechless!!!
ReplyDeleteThat's really lovely Niall.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful Niall
ReplyDeleteWell done!!
ReplyDeleteThat poem was beautiful such a treasure, I loved the last verse were there was a tear over a memory and cold clay recaps, such meaning there and very heartfelt.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful, Niall...
ReplyDeleteLovely piece of work!!!
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