An in-breath of braced air,
shoulders steady, balanced.
Below a scream sharp fulcrum,
the rhythmic scrape of
nipples on rough plaid linen shirt.
nipples on rough plaid linen shirt.
The slow rise, and sudden
fall of an arm; final
arc to a place of rest.
The spent bullet left alone,
eventfully rolls from
an emptied eye socket;
an involuntary
aftermath.
aftermath.
It certainly is a silent epidemic and your poem is a brilliant response to it. Wonderfully concise. Thank you.
ReplyDeletePowerfully done Niall
ReplyDeleteGiven the topic, done with great skill and sensitivity
ReplyDeleteBeautiful write, Niall
ReplyDeleteA topic that touches all of us and me personally not an easy one to write about. Well done Niall O Connor.
ReplyDeleteGravity indeed, Niall. This one weighs heavily! Good work!
ReplyDeleteGreat Niall!
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