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Saturday, October 18, 2014

Sea View


Photograph by Maisie Ong

He was feeling the adrenaline,

and his leg was going for ninety:

Senior citizen tourist, tweed jacket, 

warm clothes, Beanie headlining:

Guinness.

 

He sat on the promenade bench

watching the young girls go by; 

china porcelain dolls, untouchable

by fingers grown gnarled and weary

by a bygone age of manual work.

 

His hands that now hung limp and soft

were once used as tools for a living,

interpreters of all things brutal and hard,

rarely a snatched dream, or time for giving.

 

Behind him, houses in every colour

clamber up and over the static land,

excitedly competing for a view of the sea,

watching the grey exude grey, from the sky above.

 

And down they all tumble, 

on our way to the sea, 

green grass, orange lichen, dark green bladder 

of seaweed and shore;

and the tide that marries, just as easily,

takes it all away.


                                                                         ©niall oconnor 2014/24

6 comments:

  1. Absolutely brilliant Niall. That could be here except the council forbids us paint our houses every colour!
    I love this one!

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    1. There is a sea port tradition in Ireland Res to paint the houses different colours, so the sailor returning to port might

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    2. ....be able to see their home!

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    3. Great Niall! LOVE that last line......

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  2. beautiful imagery... very impressive! loved the 2nd stanza very much...:)

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  3. How well done Niall ! I can see, hear and empathize with every line, you work all the senses!

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