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Saturday, August 9, 2014

Climbing Mount Kilimanjaro



The garden zone was friendly,
and the forest zone -cool. Night fell too soon,
and the steeply sloped rain forest with their servant hills,
slipped beneath us, in the dark.

I fought my way up, headlamp illuminating,
all ‘round me the sounds of leopards, snakes,
geography confused in this primordial forest,
where life is what springs from decay.

We camped, and stripped to nakedness,
trying to rebuild our shattered spirits
with folded clothes and tea.

Sleep came uninvited, like a burglar
silently stealing half finished cups from sudden limp arms.

Next morning, saw the departure of those who could
take no more of this risk route,
trip turned to hard task,
each day life thinning out,
nothing left to be shared.
Pollo, pollo . . . . slowly, slowly.

And then we left the earth.
There could now be no rescue now . . . even helicopters
need air to fly.

On we climbed, and lungs breathed normally,
but our tired muscles never received relief,
and not a sound, other than those you made your self,
not even an  echo, to keep an empty skull company.

We were now beyond the zone of life.
Beneath us, jets like pond skaters
criss-crossing the pond that was Africa,
and the curve of the world lay below
and beyond.

On the last night, we tricked the mountain,
using its frozen shale, to climb when she slept.
By the time the sun had risen, we had reached her top,
standing ragged for our moments glory,
each a god among men,
albeit with feet of clay.

Descent was by the coca cola route,
and with each thousand metres we fell,
fresh tears came
as emotion, and life, and oxygen returned.

I called your name to save me,

but even my footsteps
you had already erased.


©Copyright Niall OConnor 2014

12 comments:

  1. Wow! Fantastic Niall !!

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  2. Great...the climb is a part of my bucket list:-)

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  3. Beautifully done Niall

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  4. Great write, Niall x

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  5. Outstanding poem, outstanding feat!

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  6. Gorgeous my friend epic escalation and poetry! Very nice job! Thanks +Res Burman for sharing and congratulations to O'Connor, majestic poetry !

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  7. I just reread your wonderful poem...it is a keeper and its images whet my insatiable appetite for going home to mother Africa. Thank you.

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  8. Niall... Love your words especially these lines.. 'Beneath us, jets like pond skaters
    criss-crossing the pond that was Africa,
    and the curve of the world lay below
    and beyond.

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  9. Great writing!

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  10. Barbara Boyd-AndersonAugust 11, 2014 at 9:32 PM

    What a journey....

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  11. Such wonderful metaphors. Well done

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  12. Patrick Joseph DorrianAugust 13, 2014 at 6:14 PM

    Brilliant Niall.

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