The
garden zone was friendly,
and
the forest zone -cool. Night fell too soon,
and
the steeply sloped rain forest with their servant hills,
slipped
beneath us, in the dark.
I
fought my way up, headlamp illuminating,
all
‘round me the sounds of leopards, snakes,
geography
confused in this primordial forest,
where
life is what springs from decay.
We
camped, and stripped to nakedness,
trying
to rebuild our shattered spirits
with
folded clothes and tea.
Sleep
came uninvited, like a burglar
silently
stealing half finished cups from sudden limp arms.
Next
morning, saw the departure of those who could
take
no more of this risk route,
trip
turned to hard task,
each
day life thinning out,
nothing
left to be shared.
Pollo,
pollo . . . . slowly, slowly.
And
then we left the earth.
There
could now be no rescue now . . . even helicopters
need air to fly.
On
we climbed, and lungs breathed normally,
but
our tired muscles never received relief,
and
not a sound, other than those you made your self,
not
even an echo, to keep an empty skull company.
We were now beyond the zone of life.
Beneath
us, jets like pond skaters
criss-crossing
the pond that was Africa,
and
the curve of the world lay below
and
beyond.
On
the last night, we tricked the mountain,
using
its frozen shale, to climb when she slept.
By
the time the sun had risen, we had reached her top,
standing
ragged for our moments glory,
each
a god among men,
albeit
with feet of clay.
Descent
was by the coca cola route,
and
with each thousand metres we fell,
fresh
tears came
as
emotion, and life, and oxygen returned.
I
called your name to save me,
but
even my footsteps
you had already erased.
you had already erased.
©Copyright Niall OConnor 2014
Wow! Fantastic Niall !!
ReplyDeleteGreat...the climb is a part of my bucket list:-)
ReplyDeleteBeautifully done Niall
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ReplyDeleteGreat write, Niall x
Outstanding poem, outstanding feat!
ReplyDeleteGorgeous my friend epic escalation and poetry! Very nice job! Thanks +Res Burman for sharing and congratulations to O'Connor, majestic poetry !
ReplyDeleteI just reread your wonderful poem...it is a keeper and its images whet my insatiable appetite for going home to mother Africa. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteNiall... Love your words especially these lines.. 'Beneath us, jets like pond skaters
ReplyDeletecriss-crossing the pond that was Africa,
and the curve of the world lay below
and beyond.
Great writing!
ReplyDeleteWhat a journey....
ReplyDeleteSuch wonderful metaphors. Well done
ReplyDeleteBrilliant Niall.
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