You
flowers of El
who
live in this ancient passageway,
in
a wilderness through which every man has passed,
spreading
like a plague across the face of a naive earth,
forging
new religions and theocracies;
chains
to restrain
what
otherwise blossoms free.
Navigation
is by night skies here,
both
on land and sea,
and
you willingly share of the stars,
but
not the dirt shaken from your feet.
Christian
beware!
The
land of Christ is not yours.
Moses
parted seas and nations to come here,
leading
his tribe into the promised land;
promised
by G-d
to
His chosen ones . . . to the exclusion of all others?
Jew
beware!
The
promised land is yours, only to share.
Formed
from the same star dust.
Believers
in the same imaginary friend.
How
can dust rule dust I cry!
But
when my tears fall,
they
fall, not on dust,
but on lives that are hate-baked;
but on lives that are hate-baked;
forming
religions from otherwise seamless lives.
Muslim
beware!
You
too must share.
This
is a land that can be possessed . . .
only as a night sky can widen your mind,
only as an idea can show you the way,
only as love can illuminate, and guide you through.
only as a night sky can widen your mind,
only as an idea can show you the way,
only as love can illuminate, and guide you through.
In
this land
we
can only have rights of passage.
©Copyright Niall OConnor 2012
I wish..those beautiful times of harmony and peace return..when a Muslim, a Christian and a Jew celebrated together, lived with each other..when the land was truly holy because all religions were connected, no one is above the other..no one is superior than the other..now that Muslims, Christians continue to live in peace..and those fanatics, zionists, outsiders came to take a land not even theirs..now with these rivers of blood, a bloody history of massacres, of racism..they killed every intention to share..now that they want it all for themselves..you have a mighty pen Niall..
ReplyDeleteThank you Imen. Your wish gives me hope that all men may ultimately feel the same way. Peace and love to you Brother.
DeleteMy friend..your understanding of the cause is essential..you do a lot..with your pen..I too can't do anything but pray and write..this is resistence too ..
ReplyDeleteToo true Niall
ReplyDeleteA great way to make the point that we are all star dust and our stay here is the blink of an eye.
ReplyDeleteOh my! Niall this is so powerful, so soul engaging, so the reason I love to read your poetry. Thank you,
ReplyDeleteVery nice, prophetic read. Thanks Niall O Connor for sharing your talent!
ReplyDeleteOutstanding, my friend! Love it! "In this land... we can only have rights of passage"... and should find that exactly enough! Bravo!
ReplyDeleteYour point well made, Niall.
ReplyDeleteVery well said !
ReplyDeleteWonderful!
ReplyDeleteWell said Niall. The Middle East seems to have a reality all of its own. The inhabitants thereof find coexisting difficult much less sharing.
ReplyDeleteNiall....how wonderful to see you here today! And how timeless this exceptional pome is...today and always. I really enjoyed this Niall and I have printed it out to hold for daily remembrance. Thank you!!!
ReplyDeleteThat's outstanding Niall, and considering the current situation, almost prophetic! You haven't added crystal ball gazing to your accomplishments, have you?
ReplyDeleteThis illuminating deeply true wonderful poem couldn't, dramatically, be more up to date now! Prophetic powerful job Niall OConnor thanks and thanks to Res Burman for sharing
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing Res!
ReplyDeleteYou know you are welcome Niall. Good to see you, my friend.
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